Monday, August 17, 2015




These are some examples of the writing we did today in class based on a poem called " As Long as..." There were so many good ones to choose from.



As long as…

As long as the sun shines

There will be fields of bright daffodils.

As long as winds blow

Leaves on trees will flutter.

As long as water flows

There will be a cool river to dive into on a hot day.

As long as rain falls

There will be wet rugby fields to get muddy on.

As long as the earth spins

A new day will begin.

As long as the moon glows

It gives the darkness an eerie feeling.

As long as oceans move

Waves will roll onto sun baked beaches.

As long as clouds roam

Birds will soar in the sky.

 

By Jake






 

 

AS LONG AS…

As long as the sun shines

People will smile.

As long as the wind blows

The leaves will join my picnic.

As long as water flows

The fish will make that funny sound.

As long as rain falls

There will be rainbows.

As long as earth spins

There will be another day.

As long as the moon glows

The wolves will howl.

As long as oceans move

There will always be sharks.

As long as clouds roam

People will see pictures.

 

By Duncan



AS LONG AS…

As long as the sun shines

Kids will play with water guns.

As long as the wind blows

Thistle down will fly.

As long as water flows

We’ll go fishing.

As long as rain falls

Crops will grow.

As long as earth spins

The moon will make the tides gravitate.

As long as the moon glows

Bon-fires will be lit.

As long as oceans move

We will catch fish.

As long as clouds roam

Rain will fall and make puddles.

 

By Regan




AS LONG AS…

As long as the sun shines

Kids will drink fizzy lemonade.

As long as the wind blows

Pigeons will scatter.

As long as water flows

Fathers will go diving for crayfish.

As long as rain falls

Gigantic waterfalls will tumble over mountains.

As long as earth spins

New days will begin.

As long as the moon glows

A cheeky kea will slide down the boat cover.

As long as oceans move

We will jump the waves.

As long as clouds roam

You can lie on the grass and gaze.

 

By Nathan